
It takes an all too infrequent approach to teaching how to edit and actually shows the before-and-after work of great authors. In this case, the reader sees quite a bit of Fitzgerald's process deconstructed. Having seen the changes required of the first draft, it left me with much higher hopes for leveling up my own writing.
On Writing Well - http://www.amazon.com/Writing-Well-30th-Anniversary-Nonficti...
The Artful Edit - http://www.amazon.com/Artful-Edit-Practice-Editing-Yourself/...