
Presents advice on the basic elements of narrative prose, covering point of view, sentence length and complex syntax, indirect narration, grammar, punctuation, and the sound of writing.
If you want to improve as much as possible, you also need to study. This means reading good works on writing, getting in situations where you get advice and critiques, and analyzing writing (which is more than just reading).
I wound up in a job where I reviewed and edited other people's writing regularly and this was also immensely helpful. It made me really get analytical about what worked or didn't, and shone a light on some things that could be better in my own work - both from reading writing that was good and helping correct and provide feedback on writing that was bad.
OTOH I really like the Pinker "A Sense of Style", "Dreyer's English", "On Writing Well", "Steering the Craft", and "The Making of a Story". (There are lots of others I like too, but these are top of mind.)
To really improve, in addition to writing you need to:
- Read really good writing. A lot. Every good writer I've met is a voracious reader and has been for a long time.
- Read about writing, as in, actually study writing
- Edit and review your writing, and get your writing reviewed and critiqued by people actually qualified to comment on quality writing
If you aren't doing this, a daily habit might get a lot written, but it could stay crappy for your whole life. I would argue that real study and less production writing is actually a better use of your time.
Some of my favourite books to start on serious study:
"A Sense of Style" - Steven Pinker
"The Making of A Story" Alice LaPlante
"Steering the Craft" - Ursula Le Guin
"On Writing Well" - William Zinsser
"Dreyer's English" - Benjamin Dreyer
The problem is that everyone thinks their writing is great. You need to be willing to think it could be better. :-)
The advice therein extends beyond stories.
http://www.amazon.com/Steering-Craft-Exercises-Discussions-N...
Honestly I think the guy writes whatever he pleases because he knows he's got a permanent fan base. But thanks for your note; I will finish reading the second half.
